The given line graph demonstrates the amount of viewers per day of news channel in four different times, during the year.
The 6pm news is the highest of the figure for viewers throughout the year, except in August. Approximately five million people per day choose to watch channel one news at 6pm in January, fluctuate decreasing occur until end of the year and number of watchers by each day at above three million.
There is an 11pm news introduced on 1st of May then reaches its peak of four million viewers in August. After huge increase, the amount of viewers significantly drop to under one million in December.
Conversely, the 9:30pm news selected to watch more than three million people per day in January, rising to almost four million in the end of spring. However, quantity of spectators fall to one million in August then it grow back to beginning of the year’s figure in December. About 1pm news viewers remain stable all over the year at higher than one million
In summary, the data shows reductions of the 6pm and 9pm channel news’ quantity of viewers, a growth of the 11pm, and a consistency of the 1pm through the given period
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...day at above three million. There is an 11pm news introduced on 1st of May then...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'grows'?
Suggestion: grows
...s fall to one million in August then it grow back to beginning of the year's fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, may, then, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82673267327 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54442442939 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529702970297 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2171559564 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.875 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287515885173 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130047219144 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814517607839 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171787192687 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848024266519 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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