The line graph shows the channel one news viewing figures per day on one year

The line graph illustrates the daily number of people who watch the channel one news at 1PM, 6PM, 9:30PM and 11PM during the year.

Overall. most people preferred to watch the 6PM news, while the 1PM news was the least popular news among the four. Three news saw considerable fluctuations in the number of viewers, except for the figure for the figure for 1PM news remained stable over the year.

As can see from the line graph, in January, the figure for the 6PM news reached a peak of nearly 5 million of viewers. From that time on. the number of news viewers at 6PM fluctuated significantly before dropping to around 3.2 million in December. In contrast, the number of viewers of 1PM news stayed nearly unchanged, at about 1.5 million.

On the other hand, there was a slight increase in the figure for the 9:30PM news between January and May. In August, the number of people who watch this news fell to the lowest point, at about 1 million. The figure for 11PM saw an opposite trend and increased remarkably from May, to 4 million viewers in August before declining dramatically until the end of the year.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
...M and 11PM during the year. Overall. most people preferred to watch the 6PM news,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, while, except for, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64646464646 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35492220811 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520202020202 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0082423252 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232539831296 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974360214593 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812762969652 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167002682669 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779495171586 0.0819641961636 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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