The rendered bar graph depicts the information that how much population of four age groups would increase in the New Zealand from 1950 to 2050.
Turning to the details, it is conspicuous from the bar graph the population of below 14teen has shown opposite growth as compare to senior citizens aged group and in the first half century it was encountered a small decrease in numbers form 8% to 1% then it was suddenly increased by 10% and 20% in the years of 1950 and 2050 respectively. Surprisingly, enlargement of people over 65 will remain same with some fluctuations.
Strolling further, adult aged humans had only one fifth proportion of the total population in the year of 1950 and it will go down with some fluctuations by 20 precent after ten decades.
Similarly, 38-45 aged individuals was shown significant rise in 1990 and then it will fall upto 35% in 2050.
Overall, it is clearly seen that the people of senior citizens over 65 will play big role in the total population of a nation but adult people will have a tiny proportion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, similarly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74316939891 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72076277743 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.428588622 43.030603864 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219935185151 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110279763536 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122815214266 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128431467721 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12274998914 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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