The map below is of the town of Gralsdon. A new supermarket is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The map represents the map of town called Garlsdon and there are possible two sites for the new supermarket in Garlsdon.
Overall, Gralsdon has the total population of 65000. For +the convenience reasons, the first site would be better places to build a new supermarket.
The first site suggested, is located outside of the centre of Garlsdon, basically in the countryside. However, it is located closer to Hindon town (of 12km away) which has population of 10,000. Also railway and main road are located nearby, which will provide the convenience use of transportation systems to draw further population from Cransdon (with 29000 populations) which is 25 km away from Garlsdon and Bransdon (with 15000 populations) which is 16km away from Garlsdon.
In contrast, the possible sites for the second option are located in the centre of Garlsdon, surrounding by housing and industry complexes. However, it only has railway line as the main transportation.
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Suggestion: Also,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'second', 'so', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270588235294 0.268076937826 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.129411764706 0.116061578633 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0764705882353 0.0759168565197 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0647058823529 0.0366838410393 176% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0117647058824 0.0131127313244 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135294117647 0.155750635184 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0411764705882 0.0379272487307 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92340308829 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0176470588235 0.0210936926555 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0823529411765 0.0948980150116 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0117647058824 0.00437022459523 269% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0235294117647 0.00967000014798 243% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 954.0 1161.00487805 82% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.9 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.23529411765 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372549019608 0.337110787985 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.307189542484 0.247514529752 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.222222222222 0.171178102325 130% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.143790849673 0.112407865282 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92340308829 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.546246751206 104% => OK
Word variations: 47.2960964245 49.3433353143 96% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 19.125 23.0094962315 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4208880925 42.9750493124 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 135.714022679 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 23.0094962315 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.689975730869 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 49.8439542484 47.7609492067 104% => OK
Elegance: 2.17142857143 2.94281807926 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.549114685698 0.418131533498 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139453046962 0.181151798455 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0776678391924 0.0850326197045 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.688316219838 0.706616315825 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171745073485 0.157042692854 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.286987633172 0.228904883108 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158312257016 0.108899403657 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274956338622 0.367819155151 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0332889144874 0.0812612215331 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.40765028127 0.316326947829 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121511786369 0.0921553760075 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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