The maps enumerate the changes occurred in Frenton durung 1990 and 2012
Overall, throughout the period town went through a list of amendments.whereas, library and school remained intacted.
The town was intersected with a high street running in the middle of town,the houses on the east side of frenton were demolished to build blocks of flats along with more flats on the right of the high street in the north-east corner.Moreover, theatre and shops in south were converted itno cinema and supermaket.Besides this, the café and park were removed to set a hotel and golf in 2012, spreading from the blocks of flats to right of the high street.
On the other side of high street, trees in the west were chopped down and a technopark was opened.Moving ahead, bank was destructed to make a enlarged restaurant near the school. Furthermore, playing fields with trees in northern part were eradicated to build blocks of flats.In addition, the area of hospital was expanded in 2012.In last, school amd library remained same during this period.
- The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life 67
- Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes.Argue both sides and give your opinion.Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant exampl 73
- Some people say that educational success most of the time depends on having a good teacher Others say that student attitudes also do matters Discuss both views and give your opinion 76
- The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from the suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Today more and more full time university students focus on other activities rather than spend a lot of time studying Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, moreover, so, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06358381503 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96900580823 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.567392831 43.030603864 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.0 112.824112599 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.25 22.9334400587 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.23603664747 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121580663166 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801781266927 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890449128354 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12548815942 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172001907822 0.0819641961636 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.2329268293 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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