The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today.
The two maps depict how a beachfront area in Australia changed between 1950 and the present. From the overall perspective, this area has witnessed relatively extensive transformations and modifications, the most noticeable of which is the widening of the main road and the addition of recreational facilities.
In the west, a supplementary restaurant has been established in the formerly vacant location. In addition, an additional surf club has been situated adjacent to the enlarged pool. Moreover, the 25m pool has witnessed a twofold expansion, becoming a 50-meter pool.
Regarding the east of the beachfront area, the 25m pool has still maintained the status quo, while another surf club which has been sandwiched between the 25-meter pool and the pre-established lighthouse has been newly erected.
Looking to the northwest, a playground has been completely demolished and replaced by another new car park while the dining tables and the pavilion located alongside the access road have remained unaltered in terms of shape and size. The access road has been extended, leading to the lighthouse which has been currently situated to the northwest of the beach. From north to south, the beach has remained untouched.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the lighthouse which has been currently situated to the northwest of the beach. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, regarding, so, still, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43229166667 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04052043899 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557291666667 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7366299552 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112070545309 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534693407663 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113901766236 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784120467665 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099678390645 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.