The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now

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The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

Given are the two maps contrasting the layouts of an undetermined bookstore between 2000 and to date.
It is conspicuous that the interior structure of the store underwent several changes in the consolidation of certain book sections and adding more new services for visitors.

In the past, a large L-shaped area along the entire north and half of the right-hand side wall was wholly reserved for the widespread genre, namely fiction. Adjoining the center of layout was dedicated to display three distinct kinds of volume including art, hobbies and cookery. Nevertheless, during the time, these three genres are relocated to where fiction shelves were; as a result art, hobbies, cookery and fiction are sharing the same portions in the north space, respectively. In the interim, the vacant position is taken up by three sets of round tables and chairs and below them is the appearance of a cafe which was formerly the area of non-fiction. Besides, the other sections for fiction books are shifted into non-fiction ones.

Apart from the modifications, some parts of the layout remain intact consist of an entrance on the left-hand side of the bookstore, a travel and new books sections in front of the entrance. It is also similar to a service desk on the right hand corner below the new books.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, nevertheless, so, apart from, as for, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00460829493 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70384808247 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622119815668 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6989932773 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816891249341 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389323226316 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724688780653 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716572051339 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932346375264 0.0819641961636 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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