The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
These two maps of the centre of the town of Islip give information the city currently and in the future
Overall, a lot of modifications can be observed during the forecast development.
According to the current state of the city, the main area of the city is sourrended by the shops, countryside and housing estate. Between the two shops there is the main road and a big park in the north east.
Looking more closely at the map predicting the future development of the city, a lot of modification can be observed. There will be an increase in the size of the city centre, therefore the countryside will disappear. The single road were will be replaced with a dual carriage, and there will be built a pedestrian area in the central area of the city. There were be constructed new houses and the shops and the countryside were will be replaced with a new shopping centre, a car park and a bus station.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...slip give information the city currently and in the future Overall, a lot of m...
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... the main area of the city is sourrended by the shops, countryside and housing es...
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...erefore the countryside will disappear. The single road were will be replaced wi...
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...he central area of the city. There were be constructed new houses and the shops an...
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...ouses and the shops and the countryside were will be replaced with a new shopping centre,...
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...d with a new shopping centre, a car park and a bus station.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59509202454 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71864297202 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490797546012 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0170024227 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0689257147926 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373539428581 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540235077076 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709149607431 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708069199128 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.