The supplied diagram show the changes that occurred in the coastal vacation of Templeton during the period between 1990 and 2005
It is evident that this place developed and became more industrial over the period
In 1990, the Templeton resort was undeveloped place with many trees, housing estates and public facilities such as hospital, school and factory. While in 2005, it had experienced substantial changes. To begin with,where the trees used to be located, there was a contruction of a new airport, which was located in North East. Futher developments which took place to the South East of Templeton were the transformation of housing estates into factory together with the contruction of ferry. Many houses were established beside hospital after the government replanted the trees. Another striking change was expansion of the residential area , which was built around the lake in North West over the 15 years period. The same development had taken place in South West, a lot of departments had been become more bulit up by demolishing trees and housing estates. An intersting development had been the introduction of big supermarkt which is to the north of aparments. Another notable change was extension of railways to coastal line. Finally, the new housing area had been settled between the two roads running from west to east of the seaside resort of Templeton.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , where
...enced substantial changes. To begin with,where the trees used to be located, there was...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ge was expansion of the residential area , which was built around the lake in Nort...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, while, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17488789238 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74878219789 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582959641256 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.9211962344 43.030603864 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204786714052 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704324391848 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827815284684 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160984775104 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990148033447 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.