The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned
future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict the considerable transformation to Norbiton which currently is an industrial area.
Overall, there are many new buildings erected and some factories have been converted to housing for the people.
First and Foremost, currently, a river flows freely towards the northern part of area, which remains undisturbed in the future plan as well, although a flyover is built across the river that leads to a housing area towards the north that sucks that the home oversees the water. As of now this space is occupied by a farmland. Additionally, the south of the flyover connects to the central block thus eliminating a factory on its way. The north-western part holds space for a factory, which is going to be replaced by a pathway starting from central block and end with houses.
The east part of the region is modernised to build a playground and school. The pathway is untouched except for a new cross section that forms the entrance to the playground and towards the east ends with a school, where there a factory now. Likewise, the south of the town is replenished with shops and medical centre on either side of the road that connects to a small roundabout which is presently missing. The path on the south remains the same except for a smaller round block.
- Graph information 11
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 82
- Some students tend to travel after finishing school and spend time working somewhere instead of going to the university directly What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development May 2021 Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant e 73
- Living in a foreign country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with it 61
- Many small local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area How does this effect local communities How could this situation be improved 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nised to build a playground and school. The pathway is untouched except for a new c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, likewise, so, thus, well, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82727272727 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66341916583 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559090909091 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7343606009 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0875189102141 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339439601074 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628390248202 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714169110145 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811701185346 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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