The maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The maps illustrate the major changes which were made to the transport infrastructure of a city hospital over a three-year period between 2007 and 2010.
Overall, it is apparent that three modifications were added to the city hospital’s vehicle access. They were the introduction of a bus station and two roundabouts and the expansion of the car park.
One interesting change is that there used to be 3 bus stops on either side of Hospital Road. However, in 2010, they were removed to make way for a new bus station on the west of Hospital Road. It can be accessed via the side roads of both new roundabouts. One was situated at the junction of the City and Hospital Roads while the other was constructed at the other end of Hospital Road, also connected by the Ring Road.
If we look at the car park, in 2007, it was located to the southeast of the hospital which was accessed via the Ring Road and used by both staff and public members. In three years' time, a new public car park had been built on the east of the hospital whereas the old one turned out to be allowed only for hospital staff.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bus' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'buses', 'busses'.
Suggestion: buses; busses
...sting change is that there used to be 3 bus stops on either side of Hospital Road. ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... allowed only for hospital staff.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53465346535 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54957704406 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529702970297 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7525791179 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.777777778 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341203873431 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142780046738 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712079243075 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201845175881 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645874926618 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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