The graph compares the current Norbiton industrial area with the proposal plan of the site.
Overall, the changes consist of expanding, replacing and building new areas for the site to accommodate people better.
The road on the southern side of the map will have a roundabout in the middle of the road. On the left of the first roundabout, a Medical centre will be added. The shops will be constructed on the southwestern side of the second roundable, which will remain the same in both maps. All the factories will be replaced with Housing facilities on the east, northwest, and north side of the map.
The road on the eastern side of the big roundable will lead to 2 new buildings that will be constructed in the future plan, which are School and playground, with School will be built at the end of the road while the Playground will be built on the north of the road accompanied with the east housing facility. The northwest side of the second roundable, a road will be built and leads to the northwest housing facility. On the northern side of the map the farmland will be moved to accommodate the new housing facility with the road leading up to it.
- The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area in Britain The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed 67
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary Write least 250 words 56
- At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 61
- In recent years more and more people are choosing to read e books rather than paper books Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60869565217 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58454557767 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454106280193 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7140572301 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14442152979 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873404613573 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120018250964 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159914237353 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14579565715 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.