Here, the map demonstrates the alters of Pentland area, over the period of 27 years.
Overall, It is manifest that the town undergone has significant changes over the period of the introduction with many facilities.
At a first glance, the map reveals that in the year 1980, in Pentland area, there was a road which connect in all the fours directions, in the northern side of the area a huge sea was located and in the western side of the road, industrial area were placed, opposite side of that area a car park was attached towards that road. It is interesting to note that the in the south- east side glass land were presented with full of grass.
Further analysis of the map portrays after 27 years that the road remain same in all the four directions, yet plethora of changes has been took place. In the side of north a huge sea is demolished and converted into yacht marina and similar to the car park. It can be clearly seen that the in the south- west direction a cinema has been developed and opposite to that there are serval houses which attached together. The location of car park had been changed from east to west.
- Some people argue that technological inventions such as smartphones are making people socially less interactive Discuss both views 78
- More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information Therefore there is no need for printed books magazines and newspapers To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period 92
- Throughout history male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful 67
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology In what ways has technology affected personal relationships Has this become a positive or negative development 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the northern side of the area a huge sea was located and in the western side of t...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ide of that area a car park was attached towards that road. It is interesting to ...
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Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...tions, yet plethora of changes has been took place. In the side of north a huge sea ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49514563107 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39666246081 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6643418822 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152515958518 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064737087771 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567336275876 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926093662622 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312043041563 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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