Given are the two maps depicting the proposed transformations of the Road System in an attempt to reduce the number of accidents over a course of time.
Perceptibly, the Road system is predicted to experience drastic modifications with the appearance of the roundabout and traffic lights as a noticeable feature.
When it comes to the east side of the Forest Road that directs from northeast to southwest and crosses the west-to-east City road, there is an interchange made by a current supermarket and the City Road. In order to decrease frequent accidents, guidance equipment specifically a roundabout is proposed to be constructed there, which connected directly to the supermarket.
Moving on to the west side of the Forest Road, the only amenity- school located in the top left-hand corner of the map is accessed by students from residential areas on each side of the Low land. Over the ensuing years, City Road is predicted to be reconstructed so as to demolish the zigzags before and several traffic lights are proposed to be added at the intersection of Low land and City Road in an attempt to avoid the occurrence of tragic accidents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two maps depicting the proposed tra...
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Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...y Road is predicted to be reconstructed so as to demolish the zigzags before and several...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97395833333 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03827132839 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557291666667 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.7442361315 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.166666667 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143054049318 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770097579167 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061473035811 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100975858573 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639244192132 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.