The pie chart demonstrates 4 leading causes for decreasing productivity of farming lands globally, while the table presents the primary triggers of this in three regions as a percentage of total farm lands. Overall, extreme grazing and overharvesting are the leading contributors of global land destruction; in terms of regions, Europe is the most affected part, while the North America is the least affected.
Overgrazing, which is the dominant reason of global harvest reduction, is responsible for 35% of the problem, and this is the predominant triggering factor in Oceania at 11.3%, which is more than four-fifth of total land destruction. Deforestation accounts for 30% of agricultural land destruction in the world, while 9.8% of lands, which is just below 50%of total lands destructed, are degraded in Europe by this cause. However, North America and Oceania are affected by this minimally at 0.2% and 1.7% respectively. 28% of the global farm land reduction occurs due to overharvesting, whereas only 7% takes place on account of other reasons.
Region wise, Europe and Oceania are highly affected at 23% and 13% respectively, while North America is at 5%, which is less than one-fourth of Europe.
- Below is a map of the city of Brandfield City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area and two sites S1 and S2 have been proposed Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rele
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make 78
- Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead Discuss both sides and give your opinion 82
- The diagram below shows the water cycle which is the continuous movement of water on above and below the surface of the Earth 10
- some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30569948187 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0382316954 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59067357513 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4954583963 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.285714286 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134702576919 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640383891607 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464860851976 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935626052642 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033433590459 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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