The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants. Smmerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart illustrates the information regarding how much energy consumed by household in Australia.therefore, some occupants used electricity according the table.
Overall, the electricity used in typical Australian home mandatory category of usage is heating and cooling because in Australia weather changes get horrible sometimes that is why Australian's use too much energy to use cooling and heating appliances.
Having a quick glance it is apparent that the highly used appliances for heating and cooling it account for 38% of electricity therefore, slightly down proportion of water heating products a quarter consumption of energy. Looking to the similes, lighting and refrigerators are at the same 7% .
Moving towards the rest of the information in middle, other appliances takes 16% of energy in the source of electricity stand by power had lowest proportion of number rather than other energy holders cooking also had only 1% above tha the stand by power consumptions. One people in the Australian house use 5,000-65,000 kw electricity and if they are two people than it consume 6,000-8,000 kW of electricity
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- The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants. Smmerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comp 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'accounts'?
Suggestion: accounts
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ing and refrigerators are at the same 7% . Moving towards the rest of the inf...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le, other appliances takes 16% of energy in the source of electricity stand by po...
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Line 13, column 137, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
...he source of electricity stand by power had lowest proportion of number rather than other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49431818182 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19503389111 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619318181818 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9102757729 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.166666667 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238135987108 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107610451665 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813854977368 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148576914676 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716845070309 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.