Pie charts
The pie charts make a comparison of four nations in terms of the proportions of the electricity production from three different sources between 2003 and 2008.
Electricity generated from fossil fuel was biggest in Vietnam and India, while hydro power was the main source of electricity supply in Morocco and Sweden.
Electricity produced from fossil fuel occupied 82% of the total electricity production in India, the highest figure of the fossil fuel supply among the four nations. In Sweden, 52% and 44% were the percentages of electricity generated from the power of hydro and nuclear power respectively, compared to only 14% and 4% of India.
The vast majority of electricity manufactured from hydro power in Morocco, making up 95% of the total electricity, which was more than doubled that of Vietnam, just around 44%. While the proportion of electricity produced from fossil fuel in Vietnam occupied 56%, the figure for Morocco accounted for only 5%.
- Often, the most successful people--in business, athletics, entertainment, or any field--are those who have focused all of their attention on achieving a specific goal. Those who spread their energy in many directions may not be as successful. In your opin 61
- have a right to own a gun. 73
- The bar chart compares the figures for 5 different phone brands in terms of sales around the world during a period 4 years. 73
- How an island changed after facilities was built for tourism 78
- The chart below shows the percentage of people using various forms of transport in France. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24516129032 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78970905058 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 13.3790881603 43.030603864 31% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 135.5 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0587830159578 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419096729045 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937128775293 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628645093568 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108884524199 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.