The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between
1972 and 2012.
The given pie charts represent the information about five types of book namely Adult fiction, Children fiction,Biography,Travel and others which were sold by bookseller between 1992 and 2012.The scale is in percentage.
While observing and analysing the whole exercise, the most striking information comes out from the pie charts is related to Adult fiction. Initially 20% of readers like to read adult fiction book in 1972 and there was a 5% increase was observed in this trend in the following 20 years.On the other hand , only 15% of travel books were sold in 1972.However, other type of books were the highest purchased by readers, which was accounted for 25%.
It is also seen from the pie chart that in 1992,the sales of Biography and other type of books were decreased by 5% and stood at 15% and 20% respectively.However, there had Been slight increase seen in the Children’s fiction book readers, which was 20% in 1972 and reached at 22% in 1992.
Overall, the highest proportion of book readers was in adult fiction among all type of books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95505617978 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08855191963 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8912540622 43.030603864 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.4 112.824112599 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6 22.9334400587 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218547235449 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124759345596 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077649710254 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142679680908 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818340174677 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.2329268293 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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