The six circular charts demonstrate the usage of water for several purposes in six distinct countries of the world.
Starting with industrial sector, the highest consumption of water is only in the North America and Europe, accounting for 48% and 53% respectively, while South America, Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia are considered to have less usage of water, the percentage of using water in these countries is below 15%. Coming to Agriculture, Africa, Central Asia, Southeast Asia, and South America all these four nations are the largest water consumer, whereas Europe and North America have an almost similar and the least consumption of water.
Turning to the domestic section, the highest percentage of using water can be observed in North America, South America, and Europe. On the other hand side, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia all these three countries require less water for household purposes, and less than 10% of water is used in these countries.
Overall, the demand for using water is the highest only in the industrial sector, whilst the domestic division is lower than others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...culture, Africa, Central Asia, Southeast Asia, and South America all these four n...
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Suggestion:
...rgest water consumer, whereas Europe and North America have an almost similar and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19889502762 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50487757146 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497237569061 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1973408803 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.833333333 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170570714203 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109465523174 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650257762972 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134187927509 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635472308148 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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