the pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country

The pie chart illustrates the electricity generation from coal, glass, wind, and solar in Ireland, whereas the table depicts several electricity utilisers in the same nation.

As the charts outline, a significant proportion of electricity is generated by coal and gas; conversely, heating and lighting methods, which are consumed excess power.

In terms of electricity consumption in Ireland, more than half per cent of the power is utilised by the heating method (55%). The lighting process consumes 45% of total electricity, which is 5% higher than that of kitchen appliances' consumption, with figure 40%. However, just fifteen per cent of electricity is used by consumer electronics and mobile charging, which are the least consumers.

Concerning power resources, more than two-fifths of the power is produced by coal (45%), followed by 10% less production is generated in a gas, while the one-tenth proportion of electricity is produced from wind and solar, these are the least electricity generators.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hs of the power is produced by coal 45%, followed by 10% less production is gener...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48076923077 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0123226539 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2758278599 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.5 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199576450988 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102787388247 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720774436652 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130065882424 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663189424764 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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