Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The maps illustrate changes of a health center between 2005 and the present day. The general overview here is that though the center has witnessed many movements, the physiotherapy room stills stay unchanged.
To specify, there was a big garden surrounding the health center in 2005, which has been narrowed to give more space to the car parking. Therefore, the area of car parking has been widened from 12 spaces to 30 spaces. Nevertheless, the building of the center now has an additional room – the minor operation room, which has been built on the ground of the old garden.
On the other h...
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the physiotherapy room stills stay unchanged.
the physiotherapy room still stays unchanged.
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