These two maps illustrate the current and future arrangement of University Sports Centre. At a first glance, it is clear that a lot of changes are made after the refurbishment.
Currently, University Sports Centre consist of a main building, with two Outdoor Courts that is located in the west and east side of the building. There are some facilities equipped in the main building, such as 25m Pool, Changing Room, Gym, Seating, and Reception.
In the future, the Outdoor Courts that flank the main building will be demolished. As a consequence, the main building's area will be widen, and new amenities will be installed. First, on the left side, Leisure Pool, new Changing Room and Sports Shop will be constructed. Furthermore, two Dance Studios, another Changing Room, and Cafe will be built. And also, there will be expansion of the Gym area.
Overall, renovation done will cause the University Sports Centre become wider and have lot of new facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Centre) must be used with a third-person verb: 'consists'.
Suggestion: consists
... Currently, University Sports Centre consist of a main building, with two Outdoor Co...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buildings'' or 'building's'?
Suggestion: buildings'; building's
... demolished. As a consequence, the main buildings area will be widen, and new amenities w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07547169811 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75407074353 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3524126115 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1548346476 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666084501092 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030859312404 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971836281512 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172781656062 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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