The plan below shows a university's sport centre layout now, and future appearance after redevelopment.
Overall, the university's sport centre now and future consists of features that are similar. These features includes a 25m pool at the center, a seating at the the northeast, changing room at the northwest and a reception at the entrance to the south.
The present university's sport ground have some facilities that are different from the future plan. The gym room is smaller and more compact than the gym room that will be built in the future plan. The present centr also have two outdoor courts with each situated at the west (just after the changing room band east ( just after the seating) respectively. This feature will be eliminated in the future plans.
The future plans of the university's sport centre is uniquely different from the present plan because more facilities and centres will be incorporated into the centre. There will be a leisure pool at the northwest of the centre just outside the two changing room to the left from reception. Some other significant features will be constructed to increase the number of activities in the sport centre. These features include a sport hall at the east just outside the seating. Leaving the sport hall, there exists two dance studio. A new café will be built at the southeast just beside the sport centre's entrance. The future sport ground will have a total a three changing room.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The plan below shows a universitys sport centre layout now, an...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... universitys sport centre now and future consists of features that are similar. T...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'include'.
Suggestion: include
...atures that are similar. These features includes a 25m pool at the center, a seating at ...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... a 25m pool at the center, a seating at the the northeast, changing room at the northwe...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... a 25m pool at the center, a seating at the the northeast, changing room at the northwe...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... that will be built in the future plan. The present centr also have two outdoor cou...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t just after the changing room band east just after the seating respectively. Thi...
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Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will be a leisure pool at the northwest of the centre just outside the two chang...
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Line 7, column 523, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'studio' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'studios'.
Suggestion: studios
... the sport hall, there exists two dance studio. A new café will be built at the southe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95473251029 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54411533151 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440329218107 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9114557358 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 5.23603664747 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310653473418 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138706954659 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151506664838 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276397832658 0.15604864568 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.210533755186 0.0819641961636 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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