The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The plans illustrate how a transform in after some developments of the layout in the next year of Southwest Airport.
Overall, the airport witnessed radical changes with the most noticeable being the extention of gates and there will be a diversity of service amenities added including shops, vehical rental, ATM.
Looking at the entrances, the departures and arrivals will remaining but there are plans to additional to doors in both. While entering the airport, it have just one check-in area and cafe on the right corner to differ from moving check-in gate from the left side to right side of the departure space in order to set up back drop room and the repositioning of the cafe store. In the arrivals area, there will be an expansion to space with be added car hire, cafe and ATM.
On the boarding hall, there will be a significant upgrade with more gates are enlarged and the whole of construction is developing into Y-shaped amenities access to the shops where buy items. While the old background be used the walkway, it is already replacing sky train which makes more convenient to customers.
- The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 89
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- The picture below shows the life cycle of the salmon Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remain'
Suggestion: remain
...ances, the departures and arrivals will remaining but there are plans to additional to do...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...in both. While entering the airport, it have just one check-in area and cafe on the ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: backdrop
... the departure space in order to set up back drop room and the repositioning of the cafe ...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
...repositioning of the cafe store. In the arrivals area, there will be an expansion to spa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61307104948 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608465608466 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7082063429 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13958102828 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733278021805 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652380979333 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973694366456 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717969955377 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.