The represented diagram displays the process of making pizza's dough. Overall, it is clear that this progress consists of seven phases, beginning with ingredients and ending up with a dough divided into three equal pieces.
In the first stage, four cups (500grams) of 00 flour, one and a half cups (325 grams) of water, 2 tablespoons of salt and 1/2 tablespoon dry active yeast are put into a stand mixer as rape materials of dough. After that, these ingredients are mixed slowly for two minutes before it goes to the third stage - it is mixed for 5 minutes on medium tempo. It then mixed slowly again for the last two minutes.
In the last three phases, mixed components rest and let rise a minimum of two hours and during this time it should double in size. Afterwards, the dough is squashed to remove all air bubbles. Finally, the dough is cut into three similar pieces or 275 prems each.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59748427673 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31549636957 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.4634275481 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.375 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116392132232 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621037417667 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827951116652 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794113484417 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468523676532 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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