The linegraph illustrates information about the variation in levels in three location os crime in center of Newport the time period from 2003 to 2012.
Overall, in the Newport city, the burglary fell dramatically, car theft had some flatuations between 2003 and 2012. The minimum number of incidents can be seen in robbery in 2008.
To start with, it was 3400 incidents in2003, and it was peaked suddenly to 3800. Fortunately, burglary fall dramatically year by year and it reached absolute minimum in 2008. Until 2012, it remained steadily but it grew by 300 accidents.
It can be see that car theft was a steady level in 2003 and 2004, and it decreased about 800 incidents. Unfortunately, car theft gradually increased year by year. Therefore, it had the same number if incidents in 203 and in2012.
The robbery reached its peak in 2005 and it had some flactuations. It was shown from linegraph minimum number of robbery happened in 2008 and increased in next 2 yearsto 900 and continued to stay at this same level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85142857143 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76570247931 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565714285714 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.459256088 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994848012667 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369678776488 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670412303205 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706180720952 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835982661125 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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