The stipulated line chart depicts world population growth in millions over a period of 300 years from 1800 to 2100, while the bar chart compares the expected growth of population density in two regions.
It is clear from the chart that, there was a steady increase in population till 1940 where it reached 2200 million figure. Then it shows a sudden rise in the figures and peaked in 2040 with 8000 million numbers, after that it started to decline and hit the exact figure of 2000 (6000 million) in 2100.
The bar chart predicts the population in developed regions remain stable over period of 25 years. Whereas developing regions showed a completely different trend as it was increasing gradually year after year. In 2015 the population growth was just above 2000 million benchmark but it is expected to soar to a figure of 4000 million.
In conclusion, the population is expected to grow steady in a rapid manner till 2040 after that there will be a decline in worlds manpower. Developed regions keeping their population growth in a constant figure, while in developing regions it is showing a gradual increase.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a rapid manner" with adverb for "rapid"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e population is expected to grow steady in a rapid manner till 2040 after that there will be a de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, whereas, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90526315789 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54771637467 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547368421053 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6180548163 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209319853297 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978498041977 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799225433177 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149390216361 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848858967393 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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