Essay topics:
shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between the years 1960 and 1995
The line graph illustrates the number of x desease in Some land from 1960 to 1995. Overall, it can be seen that there was a fluctuation over the timeframe. To start, the figures for cases stood at 100 in 1960. However, over the following five years it remained unchanged, but then there was a gradual increase to 200 between 1965 and 1970. Next which was followed by a dramatic growth in the level of x disease after that it went down considerably at the end op period. Then, the figures reached a low 0 in 1990. Finally, 1990 to 1995 witnessed unchanged remainment in the case.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...raph illustrates the number of x desease in Some land from 1960 to 1995. Overall,...
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Line 1, column 567, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...0 to 1995 witnessed unchanged remainment in the case.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 473.0 965.302439024 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 106.0 196.424390244 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46226415094 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2086804361 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55569850992 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72641509434 0.547539520022 133% => OK
syllable_count: 136.8 283.868780488 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1069640866 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5714285714 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230383229076 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087192669284 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690666748776 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230383229076 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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