The linear graphs illustrate the ratio of people penalize for driving too fast and murdered in such accidents in Britain while the table shows public review on a survey of speed cameras.
In the initial year, the figures gradually increased by one lac every year up to a 5th year. However, after the 6th year, the ratio has rapidly grown up and reached to 16 lac in the 8th year. Another hand, the killing ratio was 3100 in the first year and reached around 3400 in 3rd year. After the 4th year, it shows fluctuation throughout the last year.
However, 32% of people believe in the reduction of accidents by cameras, while 60% of people denied it. Furthermore, 26% of citizens think that speed cameras are installed to improve road safety, whereas, 71% gave reason to raise revenue. Other reviews on the number of speed cameras on the road, where 56% say too many, 19% say too few, however, 17% agreed with the number of cameras.
Overall, both of the results were too high in Britain's society.
- Some people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important.Discuss both opinions and give your opinion. 84
- Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why. 67
- the diagram below shows a simple system that turns dirty water into clean water. 56
- Many people believe that family has a greater influence on a child s life and development compared to other factors such as friends TV music and so on Do you agree or disagree with this statement 71
- the diagram below shows a simple system that turns dirty water into clean water. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67231638418 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26533242242 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.311832433 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164581148242 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629788170595 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649796876999 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104566738794 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760458861064 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.