The table highlights a description of ages of people succumbed to various crimes in Venezuela in 1999.
Overal, the highest crime rate was accounted by robberry, which highly affected all age groups. Kidnapping was averagely recorded as it was experienced mostly by under 14. Middle aged people of 25 to 44 years were never affected by negligence. The lowest number of crimes encountered was due to negligence.
The highest offence committed in Venezuela was due to robbery, which affected people between the lower to medium age (15-24 and 25-44 years), at 4558 and 3312 respectively. The average number of crime was due to kidnapping, it accounted for a total of 233 cases, with children between 0-14 years being victims.
Blackmailing was popular for middle aged people, as it was 89; with children below 14 being the least attacked with a record of 4cases. Noone between the age of 25 to 44years suffered due to negligence, while children below 14 years were highly victims. Niglegence is also the least of all five crimes committed, at 54 total cases. Middle aged people succumbed to murder as they recorded the highest number at 72 out of the total number of 162 which is almost half of the crime.
Another noticeable feature is cases murder trippled that of negligence, while, robberry had the highest recorded cases. Kidnapping and blackmail were average crimes. The middle aged group was highly affected by all crimes with an exception of negligence. Advanced age group of 65 plus was the least affected by all crimes, whilst 15 to 24 years were moderately affected by all crimes except for robbery which was higher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 273.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98901098901 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62537466761 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9341756823 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135161564802 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548380023668 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654808907657 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107309565441 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740799660976 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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