The table displays spending tendencies on different items in five countries as a percentage in the year 2002.
It is noticeable from the table that both countries spend less on leisure and education. Turkey has the highest spending tendencies on leisure and education, while Spain has the lowest rate. Consumeables are popular in both countries on the part of their spending budget as it has highest expenditure compared to other items. In addition fashion take moderately their expenditure budget in both countries.
As displayed on the table, Turkey has the highest expenditure rate of 32.14 percent in the year 2002 on food, drink and smoking. Furthermore, Italy tops in clothing and footwear with 9 percent; while, Sweden continue to be the least as it recorded 5.40 in clothing and footwear. Moving on to leisure and education, it is noted that Turkey spend much as it stands at 4.35 percent, as Spain has the lowest expenditure of 1.98 percent.
Importantly, Turkey has highest expenditure in all industries despite being second in clothing and footwear. Italy spend much on clothing and footwear as it spend less on all other items. Ireland spend moderately in both cases.
- The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by a car. 67
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. 67
- The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods. 67
- The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatning issues such as global warming. 78
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for examples working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...the part of their spending budget as it has highest expenditure compared to other items. In...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...expenditure compared to other items. In addition fashion take moderately their expenditu...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Sweden) must be used with a third-person verb: 'continues'.
Suggestion: continues
... footwear with 9 percent; while, Sweden continue to be the least as it recorded 5.40 in ...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...of 1.98 percent. Importantly, Turkey has highest expenditure in all industries despite...
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Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, Turkey has highest expenditure in all industries despite being second in clot...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... expenditure in all industries despite being second in clothing and footwear. I...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
... second in clothing and footwear. Italy spend much on clothing and footwear as it spe...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Italy) must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
... second in clothing and footwear. Italy spend much on clothing and footwear as it spe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12886597938 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77519281951 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484536082474 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6276260778 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4545454545 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204515604841 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09452894596 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134298307354 0.0843802449381 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182086443184 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181055848604 0.0819641961636 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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