The table illustrates the amount of time each day used by the average men and women apart from their regular office hours. The data was taken among the age group of over 16 years, in one of the European countries, in the year 2005.
Overall, housework and childcare was the kind of activities in which involvement of female was by far higher than that of male; however, other activities are similar in all aspects. Interestingly, both sex had ample sleep and rest.
According to the table, an average female spent almost twice as much time as a male for household and childcare (3 hours 32 mins and 1 hour 56 mins). It is evident that an average woman spent 48 mins in personal care whereas the time spent by the opposite sex was 8 mins lesser compared to the former. Similarly, women involved 1 hour 32 mins and 26 mins in socializing and reading while it was just slightly less for men, at 1 hour 22 mins and 20 mins respectively. females are a little bit helpful than males, as it could be plainly seen that the former spent 5 mins more than the latter in voluntary work.
However, in the case of games and sport and audio-visual entertainment, males are dominant with almost double the time consumption in the case of the former and 25mins more for the latter. The average time spent for rest and sleep was considerably higher, 8 hours 47 mins and 9 hours 6 mins for male and female respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'compared' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'compares'.
Suggestion: compares
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Females
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, similarly, so, whereas, while, apart from, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52156862745 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55725366914 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556862745098 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9030341793 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.3 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138501893897 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608499005662 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347216378369 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088896468668 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154697570802 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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