The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the amount of sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district from 7 to 13 of October.
Overall, it can be seen that both dinner and lunch exhibit nearly identical trends throughout the week. Another striking feature is that the sales for dinner have surpassed lunch considerably day on day in the given table .
In terms of Lunch, there is a gradual growth in the sales from Monday ($2,400) to Wednesday ($2,595), which is the peak total. Even though dinner sees a similar rise in the business for the first two days, Wednesday experiences a slight slid to $3,445 from $3,850. Likewise, lunch also witnesses a bit shrink in Thursday ($2,375), followed by a moderate swell ($2,500) in the next day. Having fallen in Wednesday, there is, however, a gradual rise in the following two days ($4,350) regarding the dinner.
Surprisingly, weekends are not generally as popular as weekdays. While the sales stands at an average of $1,700 in the weekends with respect to lunch, dinner accounts almost twice the lunch approximately at $2,700.
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Essay evaluation report
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never bring math in task I, examiners are poor in math. and it is not necessary:
While the sales stands at an average of $1,700 in the weekends with respect to lunch, dinner accounts almost twice the lunch approximately at $2,700.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 179 200
No. of Characters: 843 1000
No. of Different Words: 112 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.658 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.709 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.52 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 58 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.532 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.411 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.69 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.058 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nsiderably day on day in the given table . In terms of Lunch, there is a gradua...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... gradual growth in the sales from Monday ,400 to Wednesday ,595, which is the peak...
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Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the sales from Monday ,400 to Wednesday ,595, which is the peak total. Even thoug...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., Wednesday experiences a slight slid to ,445 from ,850. Likewise, lunch also witn...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y experiences a slight slid to ,445 from ,850. Likewise, lunch also witnesses a bi...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... also witnesses a bit shrink in Thursday ,375, followed by a moderate swell ,500 i...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rsday ,375, followed by a moderate swell ,500 in the next day. Having fallen in We...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a gradual rise in the following two days ,350 regarding the dinner. Surprisingl...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... While the sales stands at an average of ,700 in the weekends with respect to lunc...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... almost twice the lunch approximately at ,700.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, likewise, regarding, so, well, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86033519553 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59298674253 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648044692737 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0736509754 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129049982886 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587950319896 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101427408123 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116824234787 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127284636915 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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