The table shows the consumer durables telephone refrigerator etc owned in britain from 1972 to 1983 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

The table illustrates the percentage of residents owning eight household appliances in Britain between 1972 and 1973.
In 1972, 93% of British citizens possessed television, compared to 87% of those owning vacuum cleaner, the second most popular device. Ranked the following positions were the figures for refrigerator and washing machine, recorded at around 70%. All the four appliances had observed similar rising trends by 1983, reaching around 90% although vacuum cleaner was no longer available in any British houses in this year.
Meanwhile, telephone accounted for 42% in the total polulation in this country, more than 5% for the figure for central heating. Both figures had then increased by similar patterns, ending at around 70%. Dishwasher, which first appeard in households in Britain in 1978, had seen a slight growth, peaking at 5%, nearly one third of the figure for video, the newest appliance among the list in 1983.
Overall, most of the household devices saw upward trends; in addition, television remained by far the most popular consumer durables over the period surveyed.

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Average: 6.2 (2 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, then, third, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35838150289 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59517617061 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687861271676 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2810147246 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.875 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160257553883 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659165422447 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431545714272 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943127807074 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034988667075 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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