Task 1 IELTS Writing Model Cambridge 8 Test 4 Goods transported in UK 1974 2002 my friends version

The given linear chart delineates the data about the difference modes of transportation used to migrate the goods in UK from 1974 to 2002.

Overall,it can be seen that maximum goods were transported through road as compared to other. All modes of transport was showing fluctuations along the period of time.

It is crystal clear that in 1974, near about 2 million tonnes of products transported by pipeline. However, between 1978 and 1994, was showing a upward trend in the transportation of goods through pipeline and reached approximately 22 million tonnes.After that, it was remained same till 2002. Whereas, in 1974, 70 million tonnes of goods was transported by road which was the highest number of products rather than other. It was increased and was showing some fluctuation and reached near about 99 million tonnes in 2002.

Moving Further, in 1974, same amount of products that means around 39 million tones of goods was migrated by water and rail. On the contrary, mode of water was upsurged over the period. I was accounted almost 63 million tonnes of goods was transported in 2002. While, rail was the merely mode of transport which was declined by 10% and reached 10 million tonnes in 1994.In 1995. it was showing upward trend and placed at same where it was started.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rate the goods in UK from 1974 to 2002. Overall,it can be seen that maximum good...
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...in UK from 1974 to 2002. Overall,it can be seen that maximum goods were tra...
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...mpared to other. All modes of transport was showing fluctuations along the period o...
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...port was showing fluctuations along the period of time. It is crystal clear that in 1974, n...
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...ine. However, between 1978 and 1994, was showing a upward trend in the transporta...
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...er, between 1978 and 1994, was showing a upward trend in the transportation of g...
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...reached approximately 22 million tonnes.After that, it was remained same till 2002. W...
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...ransported by road which was the highest number of products rather than other. It...
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...and rail. On the contrary, mode of water was upsurged over the period. I was ac...
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...ail. On the contrary, mode of water was upsurged over the period. I was accounte...
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...psurged over the period. I was accounted almost 63 million tonnes of goods was tr...
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...% and reached 10 million tonnes in 1994.In 1995. it was showing upward trend and p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94470046083 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63733004748 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520737327189 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9907395497 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4166666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145634981905 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737469525901 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550443310934 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121868634588 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490329724426 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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