The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourists facilities.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourists facilities.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below illustrate the change of construction for tourist in an island. it can be seen from two maps that the island become tourist attraction because there are many buildings have been built and services have been provided.

The first map shows an 250 metres length island without any buildings and has a beach in the west. there are no construction at this time.

Look at the other map, we can see a lot of buildings are constructed<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="buildings "></span>. there are two accommodation, one located in the west of the island, near the beach while the other next to the reception block. The reception block surrounded by the vehicle track, lead to a restaurant in the North and a pier which tourist can go sailing in the South. The footpath connect all the building together and make it so easily to get to the beach.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... construction for tourist in an island. it can be seen from two maps that the isla...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... buildings and has a beach in the west. there are no construction at this time. Lo...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...os; pre='buildings '>. there are two accommodation, one located in t...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9932885906 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.93731569021 2.65546596893 148% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4912232598 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199561020591 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963690480056 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916775258228 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149082633382 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616745008274 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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