Water cycle
The diagram illustrates how the water passes from ocean to land through a natural process called water cycle.
It is noticable that there are three main stages in this process, beginning with the evaporation of water and ending with the water's journey back to the ocean.
In the first step, the water evaporates as a result of the sunshine. It is estimate that water from the ocean take about eighty percent total water vapor in air. After the evaporation, clouds are formed by the condense of the water vapor.
Clouds are then heavier and cause rain on land. They also cause snow on high area. These rainwater then partly pour into lake or flows back to ocean via surface runoff. Otherwise, the water from precipitation absorbs into the ground and returns to the ocean. Finally, salt water intrustes just before the ground water reach the ocean and then the process finishes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...r the evaporation, clouds are formed by the condense of the water vapor. Clouds are then ...
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Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this rainwater' or 'These rainwaters'?
Suggestion: This rainwater; These rainwaters
...and. They also cause snow on high area. These rainwater then partly pour into lake or flows bac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86754966887 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25114914444 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0339219591 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307130020837 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136002417372 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093393513949 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215537667179 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052446859541 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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