You are working for a Company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letterexplain why you want to take time off workgive details of amount of time you needsuggest how your work

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You are working for a Company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter

explain why you want to take time off work
give details of amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Chemanchula,

You already know that our traditional Telugu festival "Sankranthi" is around the corner and it is of high importance in our community. So I am planning to take time off from the work to spend some family time in my native place.

I am very much aware that my position here plays a crucial role in the aspect of deliverables towards clients. But since the new project we got recently is still in the initial stages of design and also the fact that I did not had any vacation in last 6 months of my time here, a 7 days off will be acceptable enough.

The pending work will be completed by the new associate whom I have been training for last 4 months. I have already made the necessary arrangements and provided the required guidance regarding the tasks. I understand that he is new but he is good at his work which makes him the right candidate.

And lastly I will be available to attend in case of emergency.

Yours Sincerely,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...design and also the fact that I did not had any vacation in last 6 months of my tim...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, lastly, regarding, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58045977011 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92167199754 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66091954023 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.607492996 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188985041631 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727273261632 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817754624223 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788808327278 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781391520994 0.0819641961636 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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