Dear Sam,
Hope, you are doing okay.
I have reached India safely and would like to use this opportunity to thank you for your wonderful hospitality in England. I had an adventure of the lifetime with you there which I can never forget.
However, I need to inform you about the misadventure which I had on my own. I forgot my wallet in your extra bedroom when I spent the night there before leaving to India. As you know, my flight was at 4 o’clock in the morning and we were already late, I missed it there while moving out hastily.
As this wallet has all of my credit cards along with my identity card and driving license, I’d request you make an arrangement to courier it at my house in New Delhi urgently. I’d recommend you to use FedEx Express service for faster and safe delivery and please ensure to mention my phone number with the address.
Again, I thank you for the wonderful moments I spent with you in England and I invite you to visit India anytime during October and November. I will be glad to introduce you to some wonderful Indian cuisines.
Please reply as soon as you could.
Best regards,
Sumit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 5.60731707317 678% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61650485437 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40871125393 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0649878348 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.25 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354671953647 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13558914481 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696610931885 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199912506731 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561718112302 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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