Dear Sam,
I hope you are enjoying the vacations in Manali, which is one of the most beautiful holiday destinations in India. In your absence, I am taking care of your house and your three years old son, and making sure that everything is secure. However, I am really sorry to inform you that in your absence, your washing machine got damaged accidentally.
Two days back, I was washing my cloths your washing machine, and at the same time, I got a phone a phone call from my office regarding an emergency situation. I was so lost in the conversation with my manager that I forgot to switch off the machine, as a result of which its electric circuit got fused, and the motor stopped working.
Initially, I was very scared about the situation as it could have been a fatal accident if I had not unplugged the washing machine on time. Thereafter, I contacted the motor mechanic to get the machine repaired, and he took half an hour to fix it a new electric board with a timer, so that the washing machine would automatically be switched off after a fixed time.
Once again, I would to apologize for what happened in your absence.
Best Regards,
Peter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...rry to inform you that in your absence, your washing machine got damaged accidentall...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
... Two days back, I was washing my cloths your washing machine, and at the same time, ...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a phone'.
Suggestion: a phone
...ng machine, and at the same time, I got a phone a phone call from my office regarding an emerge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, regarding, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5980861244 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58097495993 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617224880383 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9014743023 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.777777778 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183794409642 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721822967338 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558325594657 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107158010326 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568891628423 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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