Here, the chart demonstrate the expenditures of three household items in monthly of a family in the USA in the year 2010, units are measured in dollars.
Overall, it is manifest that the most striking month is April month which dominance the market, however march month is made the least amount of expenditure period.
At a first glance, the chart reveals that the ratio of expenses in food item in JAN month were presented well above 400 dollars then the almost identical ratio can be observed in MAR month after reached to appropriate 600 dollars in the FEB month and the proportion of food item were less than 400 dollars at the end of the stipulated period. It is interesting to note that in all the four months the proportion of clothing item expense were rapidly inclined starting from 200 dollars and settling to well more than 600 dollars, yet barring in the month of MAR, it was less than 400 dollars.
Further analysis of the bar chart portrays that initially the ratio of gas item were less than 400 dollars, the similar cost can be seen in the month of MAR then it significantly increased then it expense reached to more than 600 dollars at the end of the given period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'expenses'?
Suggestion: expenses
...then it significantly increased then it expense reached to more than 600 dollars at the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58962264151 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.428411654 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4936876607 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.6 112.824112599 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.4 22.9334400587 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155965619515 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10454990844 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047951566762 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1123776783 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518276488797 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.23 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.