You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart demonstrates the average number of commuters who faced any form of incidents or accidents by various types of transport in the year 2002. Unit is measured in 100 million passenger miles traveled.
Overall, there were more incidents reported with all forms of a commute than injuries in 2002. While the most significant contributor was the demand response type of transport, the lowest was observed with commuter rail. However, the remaining three types of transportation ( heavy rail, light rail, and bus) were more or less consistent with the numbers of incidents and injuries.
Given a close look at the data, the incidents and injuries recorded for demand response type of transport were the highest of 260 and 170 million PMT respectively as opposed to commuter rail which had the lowest of around 25 and 20 million PMT.
On the other hand, the number of occurrences for the heavy rail, light rail, and bus was almost close to each other. The figures of incidents for light rail and bus were exact same of 75 million PMT compared to injuries which were about 30 million PMT more for the bus. However, for heavy rail, both incidents and injuries stayed at 50 million PMT or less than that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...on passenger miles traveled. Overall, there were more incidents reported with ...
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...re incidents reported with all forms of a commute than injuries in 2002. While the most s...
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... remaining three types of transportation heavy rail, light rail, and bus were mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, while, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85990338164 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51457512383 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526570048309 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0799361022 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.777777778 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227773860093 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11179276289 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488522350681 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16044035059 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447012374589 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.