You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The following table gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The given table shows the standard of living in five major countries by providing data about four economic index in 1982.
Overall, the quality of life in the USA was much higher than the remaning countries.
As is observed, the highest number of GNP per head belonged to the USA, which was 13,160. The ratings for calorie consumption and longevity were also the highest in the USA, at 3653 and 74 respectively while newborn mortality was the lowest. The other countries received a significantly lower welfare. In contrast, Bangladesh had by far the lowest quality of life among selected nations regarding to all indicators. The USA and Bangladesh saw notable difference as the GNP per head of the later, which came in at 140, was one hundred times smaller than the former. Its calorie intake and longevity were twice lower than those of the USA, and infant mortality rate was ten times greater. The living standards in Bolivia, Egypt and Indonesia were roughly the same. Interestingly, Egypt ranked the highest life quality but the infant mortality was slightly higher than Indonesia’s at 97 deaths compared to 87 in Indonesia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'index' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'indexes', 'indices'.
Suggestion: indexes; indices
...s by providing data about four economic index in 1982. Overall, the quality of life ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99470899471 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66554314116 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5375168075 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0811326571422 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371016252143 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450604712712 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810821305469 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418949972949 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.