You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics.
Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries?
You should write at least 150 words.
The illustrated shows up different of countries and their social and economic life cycle.According to table chart in each country's life quality and community wellbeing is different than the other's.
Initially,Canada and Japan have amount of high annual income per person.In Canada this amount is 11,100 and in Japan 15,760.They have nearly same income for each individual.Also,relevant to their economic situtaion infect to community life duration.Averagely,in Canada one person be able to live untill the 76 years old.Like as Canada In Japon this age is approximately 78 years old for one person.This country are have to chance to consume more quality food due the their annual saving.They can take beetween 3326 - 2864 calories in regular day.Thus,their development situation thier community has high amount of rate to education.In Canada and Japan most of the people are be educated while in schools.
On the other hands,less development countries such as Peru and Zaire annual income lower than other countries in chart.160 dolars to Peru and 130 dolars to Zaire for one year.Depent on this occasion this people cannot be reach more calories food.Their rate approximately 1800 daily calorie per person.Thus,undevelopment situtation also effect to their literacy.In Peru 68% of people can read and write but in Zaire this amount just 34%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44497607656 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57739184691 2.65546596893 135% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564593301435 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 22.4926829268 307% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.094717997 43.030603864 481% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 379.333333333 112.824112599 336% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.6666666667 22.9334400587 304% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.3333333333 5.23603664747 407% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 1.69756097561 1591% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0835603180456 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731383523894 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037369645565 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731383523894 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037369645565 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.0 13.2329268293 295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 61.2550243902 -11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.51609756098 262% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 10.3012195122 305% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.46 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.06136585366 131% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.4329268293 267% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.9970731707 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.