The bar graph depicts the percentage of female population who did not engage in any occupation in a two-year period starting in 2013 until 2014. By and large, it is clear that in 2013, the English females had the highest rate of unemployment while women from Wales had least women without jobs. Consequently, by 2014, the number of jobless Scottish ladies significantly grew, while most women from Northern Ireland were earning remunerations.
To begin with, in the year 2013, the English had about a tenth of the UK's whole population who had women without occupations (6.8%). Succeeding them was the country of Scotland where women unemployment rate was just a little lesser than that of the English at 6.1%. The 2 other countries both contributed roughly just about 5% of their population without work (Wales 5.4%, Northern Ireland 5.6%)
By the following year, the predominant countries with the highest females who opted out of employment predominantly changed from that of 2013's ranking. Apparently, from a runner-up standing, Scottish became the most unemployed women of the United Kingdom. Furthermore, the position held by Scotland the previous year was taken by the English which by then had a decline of 0.3% female jobless rate. Finally, the Welsh and Irish kept the status quo. However, it ought to be emphasized that the Irish showed a significant decline of female unemployment by 1% in a span of just a year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the least'.
Suggestion: had the least
... of unemployment while women from Wales had least women without jobs. Consequently, by 20...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, then, while, by and large, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04237288136 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78919149549 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563559322034 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9225818767 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.23603664747 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150259874617 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622299816067 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307260625755 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106277630325 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00431946176426 0.0819641961636 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.