1 You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality Write a letter to the local authority In your letter you should tell explain how you knew about the plans describe the negative effect of the construction on your neig

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my concern about the new airpot plan in my hometown. Upon knowing this news on TV last night, I confirmed this construction on our city government's website.
I have lived here for over 20 years. I knew the significance of developing traffic in my hometown. However, the noise issue and shrinking farmland will make it hard for all the people here to live. Most of us are aging peasants, still we will endure these troubles alone. With less place for planting, our income will be harmed evidently. The noise from planes will bring more health issues to us.
On behalf of my neighbours, I would like to propose that whether the location of the new airport could be altered. We will be grateful if you can kindly take this opinion into consideration.

Thank you for taking time to our request. We are eagerly to wait for your response.

Sincerely,
Tony

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72955974843 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56295288737 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710691823899 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4912526803 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992766032844 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320029910613 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359464352884 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701410488332 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432194634489 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.