1. You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
• describe the situation
• explain why you cannot continue at this time
• say what action you would like to take
Dear Mr. Alex,
I am very sorry to tell you that I can not arrange my time to participate your evening course. My full-time job takes me a lot of time in the evening so I do not have any spare time to join your lesson.
As you probably know, I am an auditor and this time we call it “busy audit season”. Load of deadline to complete during busy season that keep me stay late at night in office. Recently I often absence in your classes because it is impossible to work and study in two difference places in the same time.
Perhaps it would be a good idea to delay my course until October.I will be back to normal and have more free time in the evening to join your course. Please inform me any classes are available in 2018 fourth quarter so I can do a registration and continue my lesson ,plus, send me an email about procedure to switch my current course to the later one.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
Thanh Mai
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ave any spare time to join your lesson. As you probably know, I am an auditor an...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...d idea to delay my course until October.I will be back to normal and have more fr...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...do a registration and continue my lesson ,plus, send me an email about procedure t...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hearing from you. Your sincerely, Thanh Mai
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3591160221 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38850456588 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.210667304 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304106265713 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117756673546 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07739353685 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181836582079 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896097370292 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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