Dear Mr Wright,
I am writing to you to request a reconsideration of the decision of closing the staff cafetiria. Indeed, only few collagues dine in the cafeteria. However, we prefer to improve it rather than shut it down.
The reason that the cafeteria is seldom used is because it lack some household appliances. To begin with, the sokd refregirator in the kitchen is inadequent for all the colagues. I frequently cannot find a space for my food in the refriger. Secondly, no heating device is installed in the ketchen. I have to eat cold food after I take it from the cramed freezer.
I hope the company can improve the cafeteria in the future. Another refrigerator is essential to cater all the collegues. Besides, to install two microwave ovens in the kitchen would complement the function of the cafeteria. I believe the improved cafeteria will be popular among collagues. Therefore, I request the company to cancel the decision of closing the cafeteria.
Kind Regards
Jim Pan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Wright, I am writing to you to request a reconsi...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lacks'?
Suggestion: lacks
... cafeteria is seldom used is because it lack some household appliances. To begin wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00598802395 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9096497879 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622754491018 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.8026135273 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.7142857143 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9285714286 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170124902936 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477332966864 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613302577088 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112613977176 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477596731576 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.89 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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