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Essay topics: You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
1) explain why you have moved
2) describe your new house
3) Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing fine?. It has been a long time since we last met. I wanted to let you know that I have recently moved to a new house in the city centre, as the previous flat was in the suburbs of the city. Though it was much nicer living there, I could enjoy the peace and tranquillity but commutation was a problem. I had to drive every day like a few hours to reach my office which resulted in a lot of fatigue.
The new apartment, I have moved in is a luxurious apartment in a high-rise condominium, it is a studio and offers all the modern amenities like 24 hours security, a club with facilities like squash, table-tennis and indoor swimming pool. The best part is that it is located very near to my office which reduces travel time. Finally, I can utilize the saved time on the reading and can involve myself in some active sports.
I am throwing a housewarming party this Saturday and you must come. I have also invited my college buddies and it will be great fun.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Warm wishes
vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39285714286 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44661344027 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658163265306 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7907342795 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.75 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142752727509 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459337501048 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519424202487 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882507570593 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300146592597 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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