An English speaking friend wants to spend a two week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. offer to find somewhere to stay2. give advice about what to do3. give informati

Dear Mike,

How are you? I hope you and your family are doing well. I am excited to hear that you are visiting Chandigarh next month.

During your visit, I think finding suitable accommodation will be a challenge for you. I have few friends in the hospitality industry who can make the arrangements for your stay so please let me know I would be happy to help you.

Although Chandigarh is well known for hiking and adventure sports, I must recommend you Himachal Pradesh for these activities. In Himachal, the facilities for adventure sports are amazing and professional hikers are also available for organizing the trip to various mountain ranges. The public transportation system is really good and cabs are also frequently available.

During this time of the year it's cold so, please bring some winter clothes. If you are planning for trekking, don't forget the hiking shoes and a jacket.

Please don't hesitate to call me if you need more details. Hope to see you soon.

Best Regards,
Deepak

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97647058824 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66786593563 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682352941176 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5176607928 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0769230769 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0769230769 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0991427577023 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335537849415 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045101362256 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052137206507 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518975624901 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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